EXT. PARK - DAY
A park at twilight hour. A group of teenagers are hanging around, some sitting on logs, talking, laughing. Two of them, a Jason and Lucy are sitting together away from the others. Jason stands up suddenly and walks off.
LUCY
Where are you going?
Jason pauses and looks at her.
JASON
C'mon I'll show you!
Jason speed walks down the path. Lucy follows from behind. They reach a lake with the sunset shining over
it.
it.
EXT. LAKE - DAY
JASON
Here we are
They both look out into the horizon
LUCY
Oh wow. Its so nice
They remain silent for a while. She takes his hand and they kiss. Suddenly someone comes up from behind and stabs Jason in the back. He drops to his knees and the killer is revealed behind him. He is wearing a mask and carring a large knife. Jason groans in pain on the ground. Lucy backs up terrified, too shocked to scream.
JASON (Shouting)
Lucy, run!!
Lucy, run!!
Lucy turns quickly and runs. The killer stands there watching her leave while Jason is dying on the ground. The killer raises his knife again and finishes off Jason as the screen cuts to black.
Some good planning and research. This is currently low level 3 work (C+).
ReplyDeleteAn updated draft of the storyboard which is more neatly presented will improve the grade. You also need to get any planning work from Lee to put here - such as the location shots - remember you are also responsible for that work and it needs to be on your blog too.
Having said that, put a link to Lee's blog on your blog too so the moderator can put your work into context.
Make any improvements to your planning and research by Mon 27 Feb for a re-mark.
Matt